9/30/15

Speech Outline (1st outline re posted)

The Company I chose for my presentation is Apple Computers.  I chose Apple because I feel that there is a lot to say about their advertising and why people can’t seem to stop buying their products.  I am not a person that knows or cares much about computers, yet so much of my entertainment comes from Apple.  I am typing this on my MacBook Pro laptop.  My phone is an iPhone 5.  At home my family has an Apple TV in the living room.
 The main ads by Apple that I am looking to analyze are their print ads.  Looking at their reliance on credibility (ethos) and the excitement meant to be had by looking at one of their slim, attractive products (pathos.) I will also be looking at Apple stores the exterior paired with the interior and how they are not designed to look like all other stores and to look somewhat futuristic.  The outside source I am using is paired with my visual aid.  I will be using a one minute excerpt from a TED talk in which the speaker talking about “how leaders lead” summarizes Apple’s marketing and how it is able to be so effective.


 My tentative thesis for the product is that Apple markets their products on being reliable, efficient products that are attractive to own.  When a reader is looking through a magazine and sees a print ad for the new iPhone they see a white screen showing usually not even the whole phone against a white background.  The ad says nothing about the phone only the name and that it is by Apple.  The viewer that sees that knows that the products that apple makes are reliable and by seeing the phone photographed attractively they know that the phone is good to look at and that they want to own something that attractive.

9/28/15

Major Speech 1 Advertisement

The purpose of the advertisement is to show the beauty of the product.  The laptop in the ad is very slim and the ad is trying to show that.  The purpose of the ad is to show the audience "The world's thinnest notebook (laptop) and show the audience a good looking product that will make them want to purchase it. The ethos of the ad is in the fact that no where on the ad is there an apple logo or is there anything that says "Apple."  The company has so much credibility that the viewer of the ad is supposed to know that the computer is by Apple simply by looking at the ad and at the computer. The ad gives no information on the computer it assumes that the audience knows the quality standard of Apple computers and knows that the computer will function as well as all other apple computers.  The font is very unassuming it is not in your face it appears just to by normal typing font with the name of the product, MacBook Air, bolded. The Pathos of the ad is showing the laptop on top of the yellow envelope.  Setting the laptop on top of that has an impact on the audience in that everyone has scene an exact envelope and is familiar with that size and gives perspective of how small the computer is to the audience.  The ad also looks good, it is simple the all colors go together the black font, grey computer and small yellow envelope.  

9/24/15

Confrences

I found that conferences were more useful then the peer reviews.  When writing my final draft I looked much more at the notes I wrote during the conferences, but most of all I looked at the written comments.  In the future for writing assignments I would like an individual conference and written comments.  I would like peer reviews also, but I found peer reviews to be the least helpful in the writing process. Overall I was fine with the number of written comments and would like more instead of less.
In the future to improve the peer review process I would like more time or perhaps less questions.  Now that i think back to the day that we had peer reviews for the first twenty or so minutes of class we were discussing peer reviews so perhaps on future peer review days with an extra twenty minutes I will not run into such an issue of not being able to finish the review on time.

9/15/15

First Draft Informational Report

Writing in the Management Field
Joseph DeSio
Rhet: 1030:0055


            Many, if asked, can think of the most stressful writing project he or she has done.  Perhaps a ten page creative writing assignment, or a three page college admissions essay that required an in depth evaluation of skills.  Imagine writing an in depth business report outlining your personal vision for the company while under consideration for the position of Chief Executive Officer.  This is the reality for those at the height of the management career.  When composing a piece of writing such as that the author must be armed with not only the knowledge of proper grammar, usage, mechanics, but also a knowledge and understanding of how business works and how best to successfully convey that knowledge through writing.  Business writing is a vital part of any management career and a dynamic style of writing that depends on several different variables and can vary extremely depending on the subject and the audience.  Through an interview with a former CEO and the use of several sources I have obtained a better understanding of the inner workings of writing in management professions.
When writing in the management profession it is necessary to keep the audience in mind and think what it would be like to be reading the piece of writing being composed. My idea of good business writing prior to doing my research was proper grammar and linguistics.  Without proper grammar a business report will lose much of its effectiveness because the audience will lose credibility with the author.  I also thought effective business writing was efficiently conveying information that the audience is able to easily take in.  In an interview with a former CEO (which story at the beginning was his reality) one of the most surprising answers I received was after I asked the question, “Over your career in what ways has your writing improved the most?” The answer,“later in my career I tried to incorporate more ‘story telling’ or anecdotal information that supported my case but did so in a more reader friendly manner.” The interviewee went on to say that in the beginning of his career he was more likely to just focus on the information being conveyed and not think about the article from the audience’s point of view.  Yet, the more as his career progressed and until he did more business reading himself he did not turn to a more narrative way of writing.  The more interested in the writing the audience is the more likely they are to read the report closer, and to retain more information conveyed in the report. In the modern business age it is vital that the audience is able to retain the information given to them in a report, because of changing technologies the speed and volume of information has greatly increased in the business world.
            Changing technologies have greatly changed business writing as it pertains to management professions.  In recent years the frequency and speed at which companies communicate has accelerated due to ever improving technologies. What was once done by pen, paper and the post office then could be done by the fax machine and today can be done instantaneously by email.   In a study done by The Journal of Business & Industrial Marketing examined companies in several countries across the world and studied the technologies used to communicate as well as the frequency at which they communicated.  The study showed that companies with more advanced technologies had no greater communication and productivity then those companies just using phone and email to communicate. Face-to-face communication done over the internet and “meetings” in which people around the world can meet as if they are all in the same room showed no better results in productivity. “We also found that increased frequency of phone and e-mail communication among partners in a dyad tends to improve the performance of the relationship, while the use of the internet does not improve performance.”  This study shows a clear importance on business writing still in the modern world. Although it is hard today to guess how technology will change in the future and how those technologies will effect business. It appears that written information will continue to be a part of how information is conveyed in the business world for far into the future. It is necessary today to be able to receive and send out business writing as soon as possible, especially when at a high level in the management field.
            A career in management requires a large amount of business reading daily.  A managerial profession requires that you intake and retain large amounts of information in a short period of time. There are many aspects of the company that must be made note of internally and also a large amount of reading that must be done dealing outside of the company. Depending on the company a manager must be aware of changing conditions of the market as well as changing regulations that have effects on the company.  In a study done by Health Services and Delivery Research a number of CEO’s were “shadowed,” daily activities were monitored, for a four to six week period.  In a passage from this article gave an example of the sheer, broad amount of research required for a managerial position. From the article, “the number of documents gathered for each site varied greatly, from thousands of pages to approximately 100. Such internal documents were supplemented by externally available information. This included, for instance, annual trust reports, news articles and regulator documents (2014.)” This study shows how busy a CEO will be on a day to day basis just with reading and retaining information. Also a good example why note taking and planning skills are essential for a managerial position.  In the interview I conducted the interviewee tied reading in business closely to writing in business citing reading as the number one way his writing improved.
Being a manager requires a high amount of skill in a great number of genres of writing in addition to the amount of information they must take in on a daily basis. In an article by Demand Media a number of a CEO’s duties were outlined.  The list included writing jobs such as; writing procedures and policies, detailed written reports for those in the board of directors and other coworkers, and future planning for the company.  The article goes on to include writing press reports and dealing with public relations (2012.) This study is a good example of the sheer number of genres that a CEO or manager will have to be literate in as part of their profession.  It is a vital part for any manager to be able to convey information affectively with both those inside and outside of the corporation. It is also vital to write well, because as manager at a company the author is not only representing himself but the entirety of the company.  The importance of the writing and the frequency at which a manager must write make writing one of the most important skills to a manager with any profession.
All of this shows that this is why writing paired with a deep understanding of the ever changing business world are necessary skill in a manger profession. Perhaps, the most difficult part of writing as a manager is the wide variety of writing that must be done for a wide variety of audiences.  Throughout the research process and through my interview and sources my idea of business writing as it pertains to professions in management has changed greatly.  What I thought before to just be analysis and summary of a never-ending amount of data and spreadsheets is instead a dynamic form of writing intended for several audiences. Because of the changing genres and changing conditions the writings for a manager will never be the same.  Yet, the same challenges remain; to present information in a clear way that is easily able to be consumed and retained by the intended audience. 



References
Chelariu, C., & Osmonbekov, T. (2014). Communication technology in international             business-to-business relationships. Jnl of Bus & Indus Marketing Journal of   Business & Industrial Marketing, 24-33.
Joyner, J. (2012, August 23). CEO Job Duties. Retrieved September 15, 2015.

Nicolini, D., Powell, J., & Korica, M. (2014). Keeping knowledgeable: How NHS chief           executive officers mobilise knowledge and information in their daily work.                       Health Services and Delivery Research, 1-96.

9/9/15

Interview Summary

In the interview the interviewee gave background as to his writing education, in college he attended a Gen-ed english as an undergraduate and while in graduate school took a writing course that required extensive report writing.  The interviewee's first job out of college was administrative assistant to the president for the corporation Wolverine World Wide.  The title required financial analysis and extensive report writings to be read by the president and senior managers of the company.  He credits his first job to be the most beneficial in terms of learning about business writing, but includes that the classes he took were also very beneficial.  When asked if reading had an impact on his writing in the business world he stated, "I cannot imagine an individual can write well who does not read extensively across a broad spectrum of material from academic works to fiction."  When asked a time when his knowledge of business writing helped him the most he gave and instance in his career while he was being taken under consideration to be CEO of the company.  While under consideration he wrote out a business plan outlining his vision for the company for the board of directors.  His outline was read and shortly after he was given the title of CEO.  When asked what had changed the most about business writing since his career began was technology when his career began in 1969 a majority of his report writing was done on yellow legal pads while today it is nearly all on computers.  In his personal writing throughout his career he said that he has tried to make his writings more interesting for the reader.  That to try to incorporate story telling is important even in business writing.

Analysis of Sources

Communication technology in international business-to-business relationships


The subject of my paper began his business career in 1969 so throughout his life he has a broad spectrum of technology and how it has changed and what it has changed.  My first source deals with the changing technology in the business world and how it has do with writing email, text messages, etc., which my interview subject touched on.  This articles is well incorporated to what will be discussed in my paper and gives in depth, academic background to the subject. This source will also help my understanding by the time I enter the business world technology will still be changing and evolving.  While it is impossible to predict how it will change understanding how it has changed in the past will better prepare me for how it might change in the future.

Keeping knowledgeable: how NHS chief executive officers mobilise knowledge and information in their daily work

My second source examines writing and communication at the Chief Executive Officer level.  The article does specifically focus on CEO for the National Health Service I think that much of what is written is applicable to CEOs of other corporations.  I have read several sections and will likely cite it multiple times in my essay.

Managing the internal corporate venturing process

My third source is also academic and also has to deal with the workings of a CEO.  This is the oldest article I have written in 1984.  I initially dismissed the source as being out of date then took into account that the source was around the time my interviewee was climbing the corporate later.  This article is helpful in understanding the inner workings of company's management and gives insight to who it works.



9/7/15

Quotations

In a past persuasive essay I used a quote by a credible source that the audience likely had knowledge of to give my thesis credibility.  For my MLA formatted essay I used a quote by a former president. From my essay, "The legalization of Marijuana is not a new idea either legislation has been talked about since as far back as the seventies.  President Nixon is quoted as saying, 'state and federal law (should) be changed to no longer make it a crime to possess marijuana for private use' (WSJ.)"  Following my quotation I immediately cited where the quotation came from.  In another essay I wrote, in which the genre was informative.  I used a quote from a person the audience had no knowledge of, but who had much knowledge of the topic (fang activity in the US), and could provide interesting thought for the audience.  From my essay, "A former gang member said this while recounting his time while being a member of the bloods, 'even gang members imagine a future that doesn't include gangs' (Baltimore Sun.)"  It doesn't matter that the audience has never heard of the author of the quote because he is not giving a statistic or coming down hard on one side of any argument.  The purpose of the quote was to promote the audience to think.

9/3/15

APA Citation

Hawkins, P. (2015). The Girl on the Train: Australia: Random House.

Bedard, J. , Chi, M. T. , & Graham, L. E. (1993). Expertise in Auditing; Discussion. Auditing, 12, 21-36

9/2/15

Genre of Sources

Exploring corporate rhetoric: metadiscourse in the CEO's letter
The best business writing 2014 / edited by Dean Starkman, Martha M. Hamilton and Ryan Chittum.
What is effective business writing?
My first source belongs to the informative genre, it is an unacademic article.  I chose it because I am interviewing a former CEO.  The second source I chose is also of the informative variety and does qualify as academic.  I chose it because it is a recent writing on the importance of writing and business.  My last source purpose is also to inform and is an academic article.  The purpose of the article is to instruct the audience on how to ineffective writing into affective business writing.

9/1/15

Interview Questions


  1.  What was the highest level of education you received in regards to writing for business or otherwise?
  2. What was your first job in business? And what if anything did you learn about writing from it?
  3. What is the most common use of writing as it relates to your career today?
  4. How large of a value do you put on writing in your job today?
  5. When is a recent time in your career when you have had to rely on your writing ability?
  6. In your career when are you required to do reading academic or otherwise? And how does it affect your writing?
  7. How has technology changed throughout your career? And how has it affected the writing done in your career?
  8. How has your writing changed/involved throughout your career?
  9. Have you found that you have learned more about business writing in education or through experience? (depending on answer) What class taught you the most about writing? Or from what job did you learn the most about writing?