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Mandatory draft 2

Joseph DeSio
Prof. Paudel
Rhetoric
5 November 2015
Effective Advertising for Young College Students
Abstract
For years large and small businesses have tried to answer the question; what is the most successful way to advertise to the Millennial market?  There have been many studies taken many different ways to answer this question. Few studies, however, have been done to research which advertisements work best on a group of newly independent Millennials with disposable incomes, college freshman.  This study examines the purchase habits of twenty college freshman attending the University of Iowa, a school that recently welcomed the largest freshman class in its history. The results indicate that even though they belong to the most technological generation freshman still buy many products from advertisements they see on TV or in the store, and even though online marketing is considered a primary way to advertise to young people it has several limitations.
Introduction
Companies will stop at nothing to advertise to young adults.  From internet radio ads geared towards buying online textbooks to companies now buying ad space on virtual bill boards in video games (Yang, Roskos-Ewoldsen, Dinu, Apran, 2006.) A large percentage of college students that now have newly found spending independence with little parental influence over the products they buy.  An important question for marketing companies is; what the best way to advertise to the highly influential college freshmen market? The benefits of this study would be for companies local, nationwide, and online to gain the business of young adults through advertising therefore increasing the chance that they will have return business with them in the future. Only dealing with physical products or online services this study aims to find which form of advertising is most successful in marketing towards freshmen, where freshmen purchase from, and how those two correlate to the price that freshman are willing to pay for products.
Methods
Participants: Twenty college freshman at the University of Iowa.  All living in the dorms away from parents, guardians, and home life.
Procedure: Data was collected anonymously from surveymonkey.com.  The first question asked, “What was the last product (excluding food or drink) that you bought directly because of an advertisement you saw?” The second question, “Did you have knowledge of the product before the ad?” The third, “On what media did you see the ad (social media, internet radio, in store advertisement, flyer, or website)?” The third question “Was the price of the product low (below 20), middle (between 20 and 100), or high (over 100 dollars)?” And finally, “where was the product purchased (physically in the store or purchased online)?”
Results:
Figure 1
Figure 1 shows where the ad was seen that motivated the participant in the survey to buy the product.  One aspect of figure one that was surprising was that the most common type of media was Television; despite the fact that Americans age 18-24 are now watching TV less than ever (MarketingCharts 2015.) The second most popular ad medium the motivated the freshman was in store advertisement.  In store advertisement being second most popular suggests that perhaps college freshman aren’t motivated to make a trip to their dorm rooms to the store, but if they already happen to be in the store will purchase a product they see being prominently displayed. The next three most popular are all online mediums suggesting that seeing products online often does not motivate freshmen to buy goods. Figure one points to online advertisements being unsuccessful in marketing to freshmen in figure two the study will look for a correlation between ads scene online and where the product was bought.
Figure 2:
Figure 2 shows the relationship between where the participants see the ad and where the participants purchase the product.  The most common route is ads seen offline (Television, in-store advertisement) and purchased off line as well a physical product bought either at a local or national store. Figure two shows that half of the products purchased were purchased online.  Of the products purchased online a majority of them were seen advertised online.  Non of the participants claimed to buying a physical product in stores that they saw advertised online. Figure two seems to point that non-online advertisements are affective for buying goods physically and online while online advertisements are not as affective in motivating freshmen consumers in buying physical goods in-store.
Discussion:
            This study aimed to find what form of advertising is most successful when advertising to young college students.  Throughout my survey despite popular belief that younger generation is adopting new technology to purchase goods the more traditional advertisements were the most popular for this group of participants. A possible issue in conducting the survey was that it only asked participants the last item that they bought because of an advertisement.  It could be that a participant in the survey is a frequent online shopper but just happened to be motivated a week before to drive to target to buy a t-shirt that he/she saw advertised on TV.
            The implications of this survey are good news for local or small business with little to no online presence in college towns.  If a local business is able to gain ad space on TV or simply use effective store front or in store advertisements, they may be successful in gaining the business of college freshmen.  This survey also points to companies should not advertise online if they do not offer goods that can be purchased online they will not likely be able to motivate younger college students to come to their store.  A more in depth and advanced survey would be more effective in finding the most successful ways to advertise to college freshmen, perhaps, if the experiment was done over along period of time or even two semesters tracking freshmen purchasing habits.
Works Citied
Are Young People Watching Less TV? (Updated Q2 2015 Data). MarketingCharts. (2015,      September 29). Retrieved November 4, 2015.
Yang, M., Roskos-Ewoldsen, D., Dinu, L., & Arpan, L. (2006). The Effectiveness of "in-Game"          Advertising: Comparing College Students' Explicit and Implicit Memory for Brand            Names. Journal of Advertising, 35(4), 143-152
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3 comments:

  1. The appendix should be before the reference page, but other than that this paper is organized and follows IMRaD format. It presents proper headings and follows APA formatting in regards to font, text size, margins, and overall organization. He uses quotes to back up his statements and properly sites them throughout his essay. I thought that the paper was very well written but there were some grammatical errors. He needs to include a title page. I liked that he used two different types of graphs to display his information because the reader might prefer one graph over the other, so this is helpful.

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  2. Things I liked: The headings were good and the paper flowed very smoothly. Also the discussion section did a good job of telling how the experiment might not be as accurate as it could be.

    Ways to Improve: One thing you could do to improve your paper is do a better job of stating a gap in the research in the introduction. You have the gap stated in the abstract but in the introduction it would help transition toward your research. Another thing you could do is add the two sections in the methods section (data sources, data analysis) The data sources section is in your paper but needs to be moved to its own section. Then adding your data analysis would help make your paper formatting and content.

    Graphs/charts: Your pie chart was good and helped explain the data but it was confusing for a couple reasons. First change I would suggest would be to add a part explaining what "on" and "off" are. Second thing I would do it eliminate the part that accounts for nothing in the pie chart. Maybe put that on the bottom and explain that it wasn't a factor.

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  3. Things I liked: The headings were good and the paper flowed very smoothly. Also the discussion section did a good job of telling how the experiment might not be as accurate as it could be.

    Ways to Improve: One thing you could do to improve your paper is do a better job of stating a gap in the research in the introduction. You have the gap stated in the abstract but in the introduction it would help transition toward your research. Another thing you could do is add the two sections in the methods section (data sources, data analysis) The data sources section is in your paper but needs to be moved to its own section. Then adding your data analysis would help make your paper formatting and content.

    Graphs/charts: Your pie chart was good and helped explain the data but it was confusing for a couple reasons. First change I would suggest would be to add a part explaining what "on" and "off" are. Second thing I would do it eliminate the part that accounts for nothing in the pie chart. Maybe put that on the bottom and explain that it wasn't a factor.

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